Sunday 6 January 2013

A Green Crab's Shell

 
by Mark Doty

Not, exactly, green:
closer to bronze
preserved in kind brine,

something retrieved
from a Greco-Roman wreck,
patinated and oddly

muscular. We cannot
know what his fantastic
legs were like--

though evidence
suggests eight
complexly folded

scuttling works
of armament, crowned
by the foreclaws'

gesture of menace
and power. A gull's
gobbled the center,

leaving this chamber
--size of a demitasse--
open to reveal

a shocking, Giotto blue.
Though it smells
of seaweed and ruin,

this little traveling case
comes with such lavish lining!
Imagine breathing

surrounded by
the brilliant rinse
of summer's firmament.

What color is
the underside of skin?
Not so bad, to die,

if we could be opened
into this--
if the smallest chambers

of ourselves,
similarly,
revealed some sky.



Mark Doty has written a wonderful poem called “A Green Crab’s Shell.” It’s about finding a crab shell and wondering at the beautiful shock of “Giotto blue” found within it — the color of the sky, carried by the crab all lifelong and yet invisible to all. It took the crab’s death, probably at the beak of some hungry seagull, to reveal this lovely, hidden color.  I like Doty's straightforward, almost stream-of-consciousness style - he shows stylistic tricks
in favor of saying what he has to say, but his Language is precise and exquisite for all that, and his poems thoughtful and Revealing. Today's is a good example - the crab shell is described in Beautiful detail, with an engaged subjectivity that reinforces its Comparison to a work of art, and the segue into a more personal musing feels perfectly Natural. And I love the ending, with its suggestion of an Escher an Worlds-within-worlds landscape - indeed, it was that image that made me Pick this poem out of a collection of Doty's works to run here.






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